Showing posts with label on writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label on writing. Show all posts

Thursday, July 29, 2010

Something to love about writing.


In the midst of revision I came to a scene in my book that I have fallen in love with. Leading up to it one of my secondary POV characters feels betrayed. Her love interest (MC) isn't acting normal, in fact she suspects that he doesn't love her anymore. His friend even lets slip that he is going to see 'someone'. He disapears quite frequently, is never around when he should be and she can never ask him why. She competely misunderstands his actions when, in fact, he is trying to help her, albeit in a very secretive way.

I love how the drama builds. She goes through internal battles, all the while recounting his unmistakably suspicious actions.

Then comes the confrontation.

The MC, who believes everthing is okay, is dumbfounded when the girl whom he loves suddenly wants to break things off, just when he has something important to tell her...but can't.

I have a love/hate relationship with misunderstandings in stories. I hate them because I am wanting to knock the MC up side the head and shout, "PAY ATTENTION!" and love them because of the tension they create. I think they are classic writing moves. They never get old.

Then comes the makeup scene which makes the tension worthwhile. The truth comes out. They live happily ever after.

Well, almost...

They don't in my book. But that is the beauty of writing. Nothing ever ends the way the reader wants it to. It's that little bit of wrongness that keeps a reader reading, hoping that things will right themselves in the end. And that is exactly how real life is. The lesson learned, however, is this: Where one bad thing happens, another good thing is allowed to take place.

Sacrifice = A much happier alternative ending.

Thursday, July 8, 2010

The Sum of All Fears

For book number two of the series I am writing I am trying to come up with the ultimate scary place. I’m not sure yet if I want it realistic or not. Probably not. It will be a place that doesn’t exist in our realm of understanding.
So, I decided to make a list of what scares me the most. And I am hoping that each one of you who reads this blog will help me by telling me what you are most afraid of. Name your top five if you like. Or one. It doesn’t matter.
Here is my list:
(not in any particular order, just what comes to me first)


1. Seeing someone I love suffer cruelly and not being able to help them. (I have nightmares of being trapped in a holding cell, POW or something, with my children or husband in the next cell being tortured, and having to watch.)

2. Heights

3. Spiders

4. The boogie man (this one I thought I was over, and then I spent the evening alone in my house without my big strong husband to protect me…maybe I should re-entitle this one : noises I don't recognize) *

5. At first glance, corpses. (yes, those still scare me)


(notice I didn’t mention death. Been through that too much. Doesn’t scare me anymore.)


*also, what would the boogie man look like?

I really think brainstorming helps the creative process. Especially when others are involved. It always interests me what other people think of that I look over completely.


Now to your list…

What are you afraid of? Let it be person, place, thing, environment…food…bugs. =)


Oh, I forgot one BIG one... DROWNING! I hate water and small places...and crowded places...

boy I'm scared of a lot of things =) Not really.  Well, maybe. Sometimes.

Tuesday, July 6, 2010

MISMATCHED: A Thought on Word Count and Story Endings


A thought on word count:



Most people blog about the numbers. How many words they have written, how many pages, chapters, drafts. Whatever. I happen to be one of the multitude (one of the multitude who admits it) that had too many words in my MS. Yes, I do. Or did, rather. When the creative mind is a flow, and words are coming out a top rate speed, one cannot simply stop and say, ‘Hmmm, I have too many words here, I better fix it.’ Nope. You don’t stop. You steamroll along.


Well, even after I plunged forward, I didn’t admit that the excess words I used were of no use. After many months I finally came to the conclusion that a lot of those words needed to be sucked right out. Like venom from a snake bite. They poisoned my story. There were just too darn many of them.


And I did it!

Last August (now don't balk at the number of months I am taking on this. I am a mother of three, just moved, life is chaotic.) I had over 97,000 words. Yuck!

And now…


Ta da!


I have only 86,000!


Don’t you think that is pretty amazing? I think that is pretty amazing.


Progress!! (that deserves another exclamation point… !)

And now, on to my second topic: Story endings.


Tell me what you think about this:

In several books I have read the author decided to jump ahead and tell a little bit about what happens later on in the lives of their characters. This is what we all want as readers, isn’t it? I do, at least. Some books just leave you hanging, or leave you in such a wonderful fuzzy place that you just want more words to read to keep you there.


Well, sometimes I leave off reading and wonder: That’s it? Or What the…? (You thought I would swear. Haha. I would never. Cha.)


For example, in the Harry Potter series (which I absolutely love, BTW.), JKR jumps ahead and I find myself in a miss-matched sort of place. I am out of touch with the characters. The writing doesn’t exactly fit the rest of the story…for me, at least. It does give you a little hint of closure, but I wish it fit a little better. The pieces didn’t go together for me.


A different example was a book I just read by Mary E. Pearson, ‘The Adoration of Jenna Fox’. I really really loved this book. She gave a fast-forwarded ending as well. This time, I liked it, though I was left hanging a little at the climax of the storyline. It should have had just a teensy weensy bit more. But the ending fit the rest of the story. You felt like the characters were still the people you knew and their future lives were easily imagined.

This is what I think. When we (meaning you and I) write endings that skip ahead, they need to mesh. Make sure they add and not take away from the overall feeling of the book. When I am writing, I try to determine if there is anything left unsaid (even in series writing…make sure you can sell that first book first). If there is something left unsaid, then ask yourself if it really needs to be in the book, and find a way to make it fit the mood of the book (or put it in earlier on if you can). Don’t patch on an already written ending that you wrote years before hand and try to make it work. (like me putting on makeup late in the day to look presentable when my husband springs visitors on me to play hostess to, only to have it not match up with the already warn off makeup…uh, yeah. =). Doesn’t work so much, does it?


I even find myself reading all the way through my book, getting caught up in the ending and then reading the beginning of my book only to find that it doesn’t carry enough gusto.

But that’s another topic left open for discussion.

The moral of THIS story: Make it match.

(wow, and I thought I had nothing to blog about today)

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Utah Writer's Conference

Sorry I took so long to talk about the Writer's Conference. I also would have pics but those will have to come later. (Sorry sorry sorry...but they will be well worth the wait, I hope =).
The conference was held in Sandy, Ut at the Waterford School. I only went to half days (unfortunate this, because I heard SOOO many great things about the morning classes). Here is a rundown of what we did:

Monday we had intros to the 'staff' (authors, editor, and agent). I couldn't stay for anything else that day because of babysitting issues...

Tuesday: Christopher Robbins (he was sure to make sure we knew he wasn't the cartoon character =) did an impromptu talk on the world of publishing, how the problems with the economy affected book sales, and what the future holds. Actually, he said that the children’s book market wasn’t really affected. People still want what’s best for their kids, and obviously that means books. As for YA, it was a little affected, but the future is bright. Adult books were the most affected, but I’m sure they will also get better.

He really emphasized what Publisher’s costs were because many writers are always under the impression that they are scanty with their pay-outs and picky about whom they take on. Really it came down to the investment they put in to each writer and he listed all the costs related to each book (and each department that works on said book). This I realized, as I am sure most of you do. There are a lot of people that work to put out a book. It costs a lot. Paper costs a lot. This:   Publisher


is the publisher that Mr. Robbins heads up. He made it a point to let us know that they are doing their part in using as much recyclable material as possible with each book they print off.

Another interesting thing (that again, should be obvious, but I didn’t really think much about) is that besides we, as writers, being the best sellers of our books (word of mouth, etc), we should also be thinking of the future in terms of how to best sell or market our MS. There are new technologies coming out all the time and if we can think of ways to configure our work into the world of tech., then we have a better chance of selling it.

Just a thought.

(Sorry this is going to be a long post…hopefully it is helpful to you).

LATER: Ally Condie (novelist, who wrote ‘Matched’) spoke to us about her experiences getting to the point she is at now. I won’t go into much detail, but one point that really resonated with me as a mom was that we all have lives. Each and every one of us is busy. We have family, kids, relatives, friends, work, whatever. But we still write. If it is important to us, we do it.

Anyway, maybe I shouldn’t go into too much detail about the conference or this post will end up being longer than all the posts I have on here altogether. Needlesstosay, I met and talked with several authors, including Alane Ferguson, Ann Dee Ellis, Mary E. Pearson, Sara Zarr, Ally Condie (as noted above), etc. As well as agent Mary Kole, and editor (of Sara Zarr) Jennifer Hunt. Alane Ferguson was great! She talked about first chapter blues. Ways that we can do a good job (cutting out first scenes that start in dream sequence, characters alone, thinking, writing for YA but focusing too much on adult characters…because we ARE adults and it is easy to escape into the mind of an adult character, and there were more…just basically making us CARE about the MC and jumping right into an emotion-packed sequence…but not TOO emotional, otherwise we don’t care) Blah blah blah…I can hear all your thoughts. You are all so brilliant and don’t need my blathering =). HA!

Anyway, she, Elane, did what she calls ‘Flash Critiquing’ of a couple of first pages from people in the class. She would have done more, but time was afleeting.

The Closing Ceremonies were an excellent array of silliness and prizes. Sadly, I didn’t win anything, BUT I DID get a copy of one of Sara Zarr’s books for asking a question of her editor, Jennifer Hunt, while the latter spoke to us about the publishing world. (Sara Zarr handed it to me personally! Swoons. JK =) (I’m trying to be modest and humble about this…can you tell? NO really. I am.)

On another note: I just finished ‘The Adoration of Jenna Fox’ by Mary E. Pearson. WHAT A BRILLIANT BOOK!!! No wonder they are making it into a movie! (check into that, I will). (link to her news) She really is a superb writer and really inspires me. There are certain things I really wanted to do, sort of like on the old movie ‘Willow’ where the magician of the village asks Willow ‘which finger holds the power’ (or something like that) and he wants to pick his own finger but thinks that is stupid. That is how I feel. There are things I really wanted to do in my book, but discarded those ideas because I thought I was ‘up in the night’. Now that I have been on my own personal journey of writing I am going to go back to those ideals and weave them into my story.

There is no holding back.

The only person that can make me fail,

Is

MYSELF.

Always remember that! (well, in your case it would be YOU that makes you fail, not me…please don’t come after me… =)

Just let loose those creative genes and be daring! Let go of all inhibition (unless that other inner voice is telling you, you really are being crazy =).

Sorry, again, this is a long post. I really learned a lot. But those of you who can’t make it to a conference, don’t despair! There are other ways to learn. The internet is a wonderful tool. Use it correctly and it will help you overcome your obstacles. I love it! It is my learning tool, my helper, my non-living teacher. There are many resources out there. Use them!